i would do anything for him i cant stop thinking about him i dream about him what should i do help me!! i need to be around him
2006-11-25 21:32:19 · 4 answers · asked by i love nick Charlie 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
he is my mate we see each other every day he comes round my house sometimes i really love him i have been on my own with him he but nothing happeren.he was round my house in mmy brothers room so was his friend i now his friend he was me!! i went out of the room come back he was on the floor i was going top kiss him but my brother was in the room
2006-11-25 22:21:24 · update #1
Just go and ask him face to face tht's the only way out even if says no to u u will cry for maybe 2-3 dat\ys and then it'll be all normal
BEST OF LUCK HOPE HE SAYS YES TO U
2006-11-25 22:11:57 · answer #1 · answered by stel247 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hi there :) Well, let me start off by saying that your story line is incredibly cliche. I'm sorry :( But it is, Forbidden love- Cliche. Wizards- Cliche. Add them together and it's a big ball of clicheness. (is that a word? Ehh) Alright, now I've read the story. It's never good to address your audience when you're writing. Why? because it's pretty amateur. You state the obvious WAY to much. First off, I highly doubt if a girl got hit in the head with a football that everyone would crowd around her and take pictures with their cell phones. That happens in Disney movies, not in real life. Gorgeous guy? That is so over done it's not even funny. EVERY guy in EVERY book is "Gorgeous" I for one and sick of it. try to give your characters some flaw to them! If you don't, you will hear the term "Mary sue" A LOT. Then honestly, no guy is going to pick a girl up and carry her to the nurses office. Well, maybe if they're dating or good friends, but not "Wordlessly" and esp. if she's never met him before. I'm really sorry to say, but this should be scrapped. I used to write literally JUST like you. Then I came to BA :D I still need A LOT of work, but I am 100 times better opposed to when I began. Don't give up on writing, just put more effort into it. Love~ Bella
2016-05-23 03:36:49 · answer #2 · answered by Alberta 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's hard to help, as we don't know enough details. Is he your friend, someone you speak to occasionally or just somebody who you see from time to time, but he made such an impression on you? Judging from what you wrote, probably he's a friend, but not one of the closest ones, somebody like a classmate. I think the best way to get closer to him is just to behave normally and friendly... If you became his friend, you'd be more and more important to him. Just don't be too desperate! Talking to him suddenly all the time would look suspicious...!
2006-11-25 21:45:00 · answer #3 · answered by Anne of Vistula Bank 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
talk to him! get too know him more.... you never know your luck.
2006-11-25 21:35:01 · answer #4 · answered by mysterious_purple_haze 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋