What do you think of my lyrics?
Song Title: It's you again
Last week, I saw you with her
You looked so happy,
I felt so more than sure
that it was over
with me and you
(Hook)
it happened so fast, what could I've done,
the chance I had was none, then you showed up at my door,
I don't want you anymore.
(Chorus)
Doorbell rings, when I answer it, you are there
Your at the door again.
Wind chimes blowing, outside it's snowing,
Candy and flowers in your hand.
It's you again.
I was at the store on Friday afternoon,
I saw you there, thought it was to soon,
Talking 'bout the mistakes we made,
we got together too late
(Chorus)
(Bridge)
It’s not about how long it takes
It’s not about why we broke up
We just need to remember
The good times we had and we’ll
Be together.
If the shoe fits
We’ll never miss.
Doorbell rings when I answer it, you are there
Your at the door again.
Wind chimes blowing, outside it's snowing,
Candy and flowers in your hand.
It's you a…
Doorbell rings when I answer it, you are there
Your at the door again.
Wind chimes blowing, outside it's snowing,
Candy and flowers in your hand.
It's you again
Again
Again
Again
It’s you again. Oh ooh oh…
Maybe Lovin' you still....
2006-11-25 17:16:36 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Call Me Babs: Yeah I know. I wrote this a while ago. I realized it and never really got back to changing it. Thanks Anyway.
2006-11-25 17:24:11 · update #1
I personally love the lyrics and would love to hear it sung. Anyone could tell by this that you're a great writer. Do you have any more?
2006-11-25 17:24:17 · answer #1 · answered by Goldy 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Im not likely into that kinda music however the folk who're im specific like it. a number of your rhyme kinds are off yet otherwise stable (i don't recommend the actual words your are rhyming with)
2016-12-29 12:14:51 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think its a really good song. Your a very good writer. Maybe you should try to publish them somewhere.
2006-11-25 17:19:27 · answer #3 · answered by FreshmanFranchize06 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah I can see a future songwriter for pop songs
2006-11-25 17:22:07 · answer #4 · answered by UgottaBkiddinMe 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no offense, its better thanKelly but this genre has been abused to no end... think about jazz or some crap to write... this bad girl crap gets on ur nerves... p;s u dont have to make me ur best choice but anyhow its a good song, period
2006-11-25 17:26:06 · answer #5 · answered by DC 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
This can work. "Your at the door again." should read "You're at the door again."
You're is short for You are.
Your denotes possession.
2006-11-25 17:22:42 · answer #6 · answered by Call Me Babs 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its great go girl u feel the same way i do about music
2006-11-25 17:32:42 · answer #7 · answered by Shorty 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow, very nice.
2006-11-25 17:20:51 · answer #8 · answered by Zeera 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its excellent!!! i love it like a mini song story!!
2006-11-25 17:21:20 · answer #9 · answered by lovefun 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its really nice. if i could i would download it onto my iPod
2006-11-25 17:18:57 · answer #10 · answered by raiseurglasshigh42morrowwedie 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋