You saw that my hell came to life,
You let it live in me.
The only thing you havn't done,
Is live what you created.
Each day your eyes look past my face,
Each day my scar expands.
But you can't see my living hell,
Before you have seen me.
You've prooved you can destroy my life,
Now since i can't have you.
I'll make my body haunt your life,
Even if that body's dead.
You can ignore such blatant love,
What else are you blind to?
Can you ignore my head if it hangs,
On a rope tied to a tree.
2006-11-25 11:59:59 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
I'd say don't beat yourself up over someone....they aren't worth it.
2006-11-25 12:04:34 · answer #1 · answered by bartman40467 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
The poem is interesting, but likely would not be published due to the suicidal ideology. As a poet . . . and you are . . . devote some of your energies to learning about what it takes to get published. Poets who do that get to be poets all their lives. Poets who fail to pay attention to that detail work 8 - 5 in inhuman cubicles for corporations and people who couldn't care less about poetry. As for the sentiment, your theme is "How To Beat A Dead Horse." Get a new horse.
2006-11-25 20:17:33 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like you need to get a life. But first I think you need professional help. Your poem sounds depressing, some of us are depressed enough enough without reading that stuff. The sooner you see if you need professional help, the better.I have a lot health problems, I won't get into all of them now, except the epilepsy, which I have to take a lot of med. of because of it
2006-11-25 20:22:57 · answer #3 · answered by kb9kbu 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'd say that no one can control your life if you don't allow them to. There is a whole world waiting for you with some really great people in it. Do NOT let this unappreciative person hold you back. You can do anything you want to do. Take back control.
2006-11-25 20:11:04 · answer #4 · answered by clarity 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hmm,
It's a nice poem. But I think you should try saying it out, try to make it sound a bit... hmm, how to say it? oh yeha, have a bit of a rhythme. Don't worry, this stuff happens not only to you. If this happens to you that is.
2006-11-26 04:18:35 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it seems like you have a vrey big heart problem,try to check it!or i can sense that you are loving someone but you are afraid to tell her because you're a shy person!or its just you always take everything seriously!JUST TAKE IT EASY BRO!thats the only thing you should do
2006-11-26 23:19:48 · answer #6 · answered by jessa y 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a very disturbing poem, very dark....it sounds like u have been jolted..... good luck with ur life.
2006-11-25 20:04:18 · answer #7 · answered by MAGGIEMAGGOO 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I hated it....sounds like hell...........
2006-11-25 23:59:57 · answer #8 · answered by MizElizabeth 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it sucks
2006-11-26 01:13:00 · answer #9 · answered by Jae O 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
man...what was that....
2006-11-25 20:08:09 · answer #10 · answered by Lorina 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋