FOR ME ME NOTHING FEELS BETTER,
THAN YOUR LIPS LOCKED WITH MINE,
MY HANDS LOST IN YOUR LONG DARK HAIR,
AND YOUR ARMS WRAPPED AROUND ME,
FOR ME THERE IS NO OTHER GIRL IN THE WORLD,
AND THERE NEVER WILL BE AS LONG AS I LIVE,
YOUR THE REASON I GET UP IN THE MORNING,
AND THE REASON I AM STILL ALIVE,
FOR ME THERE IS NO WORLD WITHOUT YOU,
THERE IS NO HAPPINESS WITHOUT YOU,
THERE IS NOTHING WITHOUT YOU,
FOR ME.
THAT ONE SUCKS I KNOW...OH WELL, MAKE FUN OF ME
2006-11-25 09:29:33 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
BY THE WAY THIS OBVIOUSLY WAS NOT MEANT TO RHYME, SO IS IT STILL A POEM? I DUNNO
2006-11-25 09:31:26 · update #1
It is actually pretty good a little emo but hey that is what people like and a lot of people go for the sad songs. Don't be hard on yourself it is rather lyrical.
2006-11-25 09:35:18 · answer #1 · answered by Deirdre O 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Uh yes it's a poem. Er i guess it's romantic it sounds alot like chain mail though and it seems like the author is desperate for the girl, perhaps try putting more specefic details that are true about your own life.
2006-11-25 17:34:12 · answer #2 · answered by good advice 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes it is still a poem if it doesn't rhyme. i like this one aswell it brought the smile back, thankyou *hugs*
have a great day
~just a Youngling
2006-11-25 18:08:25 · answer #3 · answered by Youngling 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Is that for girls. I hope so, cause this place is starting to creep me out. But i ain't a girl, and i ain't gay
2006-11-25 17:31:35 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes that's nice
2006-11-25 19:44:14 · answer #5 · answered by ▒Яenée▒ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
lol
2006-11-25 17:31:21 · answer #6 · answered by ethan 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋