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Its stupid I know Im entering a contest and I need a example of a good poem that has to have the theme of favorite food must be more than 3 Paragraphs. Thanks!

2006-11-25 07:33:07 · 4 answers · asked by honkety 2 in Arts & Humanities Philosophy

4 answers

BERRIES

"Red berries are red.
Blue berries are blue
Yea, you guessed it
Love berries and you!"

2006-11-25 07:42:47 · answer #1 · answered by rodolfito 2 · 1 0

Your poems message is rather clean and yet you've been able to allow the reader on some element interpret your poem. you also enable the poem progression easily from one idea to the subsequent. There are some issues that your poem desires. before each and every thing you because you do not have a consistent rhyme your bypass ought to take its position yet you do not have a sturdy bypass that shall we the reader examine genuinely. It in simple terms appears to be like one or 2 vvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeerrrryyyyyyyyy lengthy run-on sentence. You do have conversational words, it rather is tremendous and under no circumstances a issue yet becareful of cliches (ex. somewhat on edge) Your writing is flat. you do not please each and every of the human senses and your message rather would not attain out as sturdy because it may. you're absolutely telling the reader issues yet not exhibiting which go away the poem lifeless. positioned the reader into those peoples shoes practice them why that's worth reading about why it became worth some time writing about. cause them to experience something. innovations - research your activities with issues people can relate to, get some metaphores, freshen up the bypass, restore your syllabic, decrease decrease back on ineffective words and upload some existence on your poem with the help of exhibiting the reader what you advise.

2016-11-26 21:48:15 · answer #2 · answered by beaupre 4 · 0 0

What is your favorite food? You want us to write one for you so you can copy it and use it as your own? Is that what you want/

2006-11-25 07:42:22 · answer #3 · answered by Rain32 4 · 2 0

just do "Green Eggs and Ham". WHAT? Plagiarize?

2006-11-25 07:46:05 · answer #4 · answered by johnnydean86 4 · 2 0

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