Will u correct my poor English sentences?

Question

Almost people believe that the world is continuely and regard it a truth, my opinion regarding that fact is different. It's impossible to judge whether the world is developing or degenerating. I think, the world must have been nearly degenerated. There are two reason concerning the idea which I think the world is constantly degenerated. Fist of all, we need to think what the 'develop' is. "Develop : to grow or change into something bigger or more advanced". what does an advance mean?
Doesn not an advance mean going front to good-for-leaving? Is our society going to the better world? Unfortunately, I do not think so. One of the reasons why do I think like this is based on the idea if our society goes on like this, our society is going to be degenerated. Hundreds kind of wild animals have disappeared per a year, and environment is increasingly polluted, Amazon which supply oxygen is largely destroied. Seeing this situation, I can not agree with that society is developing.

u may change the sentences entirely if u want. Plz help me

Answer 1

Although most people believe that the world is continually developing, I have a different opinion on the matter. However, it is impossible to accurately determine whether the world is developing or degenerating. [I would delete the previous sentence; it is out of place and does not support your viewpoint.] I think the world is nearly degenerated for two reasons. First, we need to understand the definition of the term, "develop". Develop means, "to grow grow or change into something bigger or more advanced" (1). Does an advance not mean, "to develop in a positive way" (2)? Is our society developing in a positive way. Unfortunately, I do not think so. Hundreds of different species of animals become extinct each year and our environment is becoming increasingly polluted. The Amazon rainforest, which supplies more than 20% of the world's oxygen, has been largely destroyed (3). If our society goes on like this, our planet will soon be completely degenerated. Looking at the entire situation, I cannot agree with the point of view stating that society is developing.


Sources

1. WordNet 2.1. *Princeton University.* 2005. .

2. WordNet 2.1. *Princeton University.* 2005. .

3. " Rainforest Facts." *Raintree Nutrition, Inc.* 1996. .

Note: Shawn, you have an excellent paper so far. You give sound reasoning for your beliefs. FYI, most people can't spell unfortunately or environment right (even when they have spell check), so you rock. I think you forgot to include the second reason you think the world is degenerating. Also, don't forget to list your sources at the bottom and to cite them in your paper. Look at the below websites on how to do that.

In the above sources I cited, the phrase in between the *'s need to be underlined.

Answer 2

Corrected sentences:
Almost all people believe that the world is developing continually and regard it a truth, my opinion regarding that fact is different. It's impossible to judge whether the world is developing or degenerating. I think the world must be degenerating. There are two reasons concerning the idea which I think the world is constantly degenerating. First of all, we need to think what 'develop' means. "Develop: to grow or change into something bigger or more advanced". What does an advance mean?
Doesn't an advance mean going front to good-for-leaving? Is our society going to the better world? Unfortunately, I do not think so. One of the reasons why do I think like this is based on the idea if our society goes on like this, our society is going to be degenerated. Hundreds kind of wild animals have disappeared per a year, and environment is increasingly polluted, the Amazon which supplies lots of oxygen is largely destroyed. Seeing this situation, I can not agree with that society is developing.

Good job! The sentences weren't too bad!

Answer 3

Almost all people believe that the world is continuous and regard it a truth, my opinion regarding this fact is different from the common idea.It's impossible to judge whether the world is either developing or in my opinion, degenerating.I have many reasons to back up my opinion that the world is in deed degenerating.But first think of what develop really means.The dictionary definition of develop: to grow or change into something bigger or more advanced.What exactly is the meaning of advance?Doesn to advance mean going front to good-for-leaving?Is our society going to the better world?Unfortunately, many do not believe so.One of the reasons I do not think our country is developing is based on the idea if our society goes on like this, our society is going to be degenerated. Hundreds kind of wild animals have disappeared per a year, and environment is increasingly polluted, Amazon which supply oxygen is largely destroied. Seeing this situation,Another reason is that we are using too much fossil feuls and they're running out.There is not enough conservation going on and we cannot grow or develop.It just gets worse and worse.Do you really think that if our country was developing all this would be happening?

Answer 4

Most people believe that the world is continuesly (changing?) and regard it a truth. My opinion is different. It is impossible to judge whether the world is developing or degenerating. I think the world is nearly degenerated. There are two reasons why I think the world is constantly degenerated. (What are the two reasons you need to list them - 1) 2)

First, we need to think what the 'develop' is. "Develop : to grow or change into something bigger or more advanced". What does 'advanced' mean? Does advance mean going forward? Is our society turning into a better world? I do not think so. One of the reasons why I think this is based on the idea that if our society goes on like this, our society is going to be degenerated.(Check your dictionary for the meaning of degenerated, I think you may be misusing it as well as over using it.)

Hundreds of species of wild animals have disappeared per a year, and the environment is increasingly being poluted. The Amazon which supplies oxygen is largely destroyed. Seeing this situation, I can not agree that society is developing.

Answer 5

Many people believe that the world is progressing; they regard this a truth. In my opinion this is not the case. Although many would say that the current changes are difficult to attribute to progress or degeneration, I believe that the world is almost fully degenerated.

There are two primary reasons for my belief. Firstly, we need to establis the true meaning of "develop". The ___(name your Source)___ Dictionary defines "Develop" as : to grow or change into something bigger or more advanced". Does advance not imply a positive progression? Is our society going towards a better world? Unfortunately, I do not think so.

Secondly, am I of the opinion that, if we carry on as we are, we are going to degenerate society. Hundreds of wild animal species become extinct each year, the environment is increasingly polluted, and the Amazon, a major source of our oxygen supply is largely destroyed. Seeing this situation, I can not agree that society is developing.

Answer 6

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Answer 7

You might need to add some missing words first. I cannot understand what you are trying to write about. "almost people believe that the world is continuely"...This phrase makes no sense. It being your first sentence, describing what is to come in the rest of the paragraph, leaves me completely in the dark as to the topic.

Can you please at least explain what you are writing about?

Answer 8

nothing wrong with it. pretty good. just some words are spelled wrong, like: "destroied" which is supposed to be spelled "destroyed". but other then that, its good. nothing else to change.

Answer 9

Are you trying to trick us into doing your homework for you? Won't work with me Kiddo!

Answer 10

you may want to change the 'almost' to 'Although most.....'