I'm trying to write a poem for a girl in my class that I like.
But I'm having trouble starting it.
I was hoping to finish it with the question "would you go out with me?" as cliche as that sounds.
Does anyone have any suggestions on how to start it so i can just get a good flow going ?
or any tips ?
2006-11-24 22:10:29 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
The sky's hue appeared more blue
Although, in fact its not true.
Like an angel I'd see at school
is the face that's really you.
I cannot wait or pass the day
without implying if I may
ask of you (It sets me free):
Would you go out with me?
[I'm not sure about offering advice because I'm not like a stud or anything. You may want to just talk to her and see if you have things in common and take it from there. I'm not sure how the girl will think of your poetry if you don't already know her too well already. Good luck!]
2006-11-24 22:43:19 · answer #1 · answered by vseng 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
At the top of the page, just write lots of words that you associate with her. Then, try writing words that begin with each letter of her name. After that, try rhyming some of the words. Or, you could write what you want without a rhyme, and then see if you can start rhyming it once you know what you want it to say. That should get a flow going.
2006-11-25 06:19:48 · answer #2 · answered by Katherine W 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i'm not so good in the poem department...but if i was the girl i would rather be asked if i would be your girlfriend.....because going out doesn't sound as personal as actually being asked to be someones girlfriend...i don't know about what other girls think but that is how i feel!!
good luck :-)
2006-11-25 06:20:09 · answer #3 · answered by ticklish101 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Here's a freebie:
Never let your eyes grow still,
Make them dance as to a dream.
Let them glow like a child
Ready for discovery.
Like a lighthouse on the shore,
Guide me through the labyrinth,
Light the way to Avalon
And through the Elder Forest.
Let them labor like your hands,
Soiled in slumber’s garden.
Stirring muse, with burning eyes,
You’ve steeped my mind in wonder.
You move with daring fluid
Grace I long to catch in ink.
2006-11-25 06:15:03 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
You- with darling lips and curvy hips
Me- stare and wonder waiting lover
Is this like the infamy
of lonely tales and stormy seas?
Or can i ask... as free can questions be.
would you go out with me?
2006-11-25 06:31:07 · answer #5 · answered by Michael C 1 · 2⤊ 1⤋
As I sit daily in the class we share,
It's hard to focus when I 'm attracted
to your beauty so uncompared.........
2006-11-25 06:55:30 · answer #6 · answered by papabeartex 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋