Would any of you out there be willing to read my short story, and tell me what you think about it?

Question

I hope to become an author someday. i guess you could say that it is sort of "my dream". My main influences are Stephen King. Dean Koontz is okay, but for some reason i can't really get into his writing. Another good author is Bentley Little, although you probably haven't heard of him.

Now my story is called "A Knock At The Door". it is about a small neighborhood who come into contact with a mysterious door to door salesman.
He terrorizes and threatens them if they refuse the strange policies that he is selling. wait a minute, i've already said enough. if your interested contact me, and I'll e-mail you my story. my email is [e-mail]

Answer 1

Why don't you send it to www.grimmy productions. co.uk?
if it's any good it will appear in "Delivered" magazine.

Answer 2

Your story is very interesting. I dream to become a writer too, like you. Hope we will become friends and for others who also like stories and novels. E-mail me here: [e-mail]

Answer 3

Sounds interesting mail me at [e-mail], thanq!

Answer 4

Okay, I am writing a novel too. I'm Email you for it.

Answer 5

mmm..sounds interesting.

Answer 6

sure I'll read it

Answer 7

Bring it on....