This song was written by me back in 2003 but I know it lacks something and the music is too repetitive and when I wrote this I was just a sophmore in High School can someone critique this for me, THIS IS NOT AN ADVERTISMENT because I am not planning on selling it I just need it critiqued for my own enjoyment thank you! Ps Critisms welcome I have critisized this song myself! http://www.myspace.com/sfilanderos
2006-11-24 11:47:58 · 5 answers · asked by E.F. Landeros 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Um... did you like kidnap bob dylan and get him to sing for you?
Or, I guess it was a little high... perhaps tom petty?
Okay, but yep, it was a bit repetitive. I would recommend clearing up the vocals -they really are incomprehensible, creating a bridge, a discernible verse and chorus...
2006-11-24 11:52:50 · answer #1 · answered by Sylvie M 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I honestly did not like the song, but good luck next time.
2006-11-24 19:57:06 · answer #2 · answered by linda 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I liked the sound of the song, but really couldn't understand any of the words. kinda confusing....
2006-11-24 19:57:12 · answer #3 · answered by pancho_villa 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it.
2006-11-24 19:50:29 · answer #4 · answered by che_karlos 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
uhhh...
TFTP
2006-11-24 19:56:11 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋