this is a preview for a movie that me and my friend are making for a history project. Its very loosely based on fight club tell me what you think thanks
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rNBLiZaClTc
2006-11-24 09:00:29 · 3 answers · asked by novaicedogs9 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Movies
thanks for the tip we'll work on it
2006-11-24 09:11:10 · update #1
that tree was an accident and we forgot that the face was there
2006-11-24 09:23:40 · update #2
Your editing need to be tightened up. Most movie previews are no longer than 2 minutes max. You should show some scenes of what happens after the club is formed.
On another note, why does one of the trees have a mustache?
2006-11-24 09:17:42 · answer #1 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I watched about half of it before the camerawork made me sick. Too much motion tends to give people that "seasick" sort of feeling.
Also the beginning starts out way too slow. Don't have your cameraman running with the camera next time.
2006-11-24 17:04:45 · answer #2 · answered by travis R 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sorry, but it's not all that interesting.
2006-11-24 17:17:39 · answer #3 · answered by happyday to you 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋