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He searched for a victim of his vermin,
He swam across the seas.
And there he'd rest,
until death let,
The victim of him free.

The men who fought this monster,
Will fight but shan't succeeed.
For the creature from hell,
Will find them as well,
And they themselves shall bleed.

But you shan't know this evil beast,
Till he is inside you.
And there he'll grow,
And then you'll know,
My tragedy is true.

For this poem and for many lives,
This is the final stanza.
The monster came,
Revealed his name,
The monster's name was cancer.

2006-11-24 08:44:21 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities Other - Arts & Humanities

6 answers

Pretty good one.. you described cancer as a monster wich is true, I hope Medicine will find a cure for it and very soon..so people won't die of it anymore..
:)

2006-11-24 08:49:30 · answer #1 · answered by Gaztastic 2 · 0 0

I liked it. It was original and poignant. I particulary liked the flow of these lines:
And there he'll grow,
And then you'll know

If you are interested in sharing your poetry and getting feedback on it, I reccomend going to a poetry forum. One I really like is www.everypoet.com.

2006-11-24 16:55:39 · answer #2 · answered by Lachelle 3 · 1 0

Wow! This is a very brilliant poem. If you have more of this continue to write poems. Wish you the best of luck. You have a natural talent.

2006-11-24 17:20:54 · answer #3 · answered by Emerald 2 · 0 0

Hey, this one is actually quite good

2006-11-26 04:23:41 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

aww...

Tragic and true... I like it.

2006-11-24 17:16:25 · answer #5 · answered by MLV 2 · 0 0

it's exceptional (and sad).

2006-11-24 16:52:00 · answer #6 · answered by mosaic 6 · 0 0

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