i know where you've been
my love
i can tell from the look on your face
i know you have something to hide
it's not gambling
it's not drinking
it's just another gal
i know where you've been
my darling
you can't hide it from me
my love
even if my heart is breaking
i can't take it anymore
no i won't beg you to stay
my darling
the door is wide open
my love
and it hurts me when i'm singing
these simple words
don't lie to me
my love
i know you've been messing around
with some other girl
my darling
when i was out of town
this time is the last time
my darling
i can't take it anymore
so take your stuff out the door
no i won't beg you to stay
my darling
you can't hide it from me
my love
even if my heart is breaking
i can't take it anymore
tell me what i should change...
i wanna make it a jazz song...any suggestion welcome!!!
thank you!!!
2006-11-24 07:48:50 · 4 answers · asked by Billie 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
"these lyrics",sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i'm french!!!!
2006-11-24 07:49:32 · update #1
I loved it. Haven't got any suggestions, only encouragement. That's really good. Thanks for sharing & keep developing your talent. ☺
2006-11-24 08:15:10 · answer #1 · answered by Shadow 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your English is light years better than my French so no worries friend! LOL I like it! Since you are French you can do a French and an English version or maybe even merge the two...keep up the good work and merci!
2006-11-24 08:00:52 · answer #2 · answered by tigerlily_catmom 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow, that was great!
one suggestion, on some lines like the last paragraph
you get a little too much into my love, my darling!
BUT IT WAS GREAT!
2006-11-24 07:56:20 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great! Thanks for sharing!
2006-11-24 07:50:27 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋