My summary: A rabbit child, born with a soul and the ability to understand the humans' language, finds a magic scarf that transforms him and gives him his first taste of the human lifestyle.
The genre, as you can tell, is fantasy, and the protagonist is an anthropomorphic rabbit named Wish. I'm not directing it to any certain age group.
2006-11-24 05:54:46 · 21 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Totally terrific!!
Be sure to read as much as you can about rabbits and read the ones already done (Watership Down by Richard Adams) and R.M. Lockley’s, The Private Life of Rabbits, which Adams used to research.
Then sit back and map out YOUR story. Is sounds great--good luck.
2006-11-24 12:14:46 · answer #1 · answered by nanlwart 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds very cute. However, you should read the book The Miraculous Journey of Edward Toulane, I forget who it is by but it's a wonderful book with the same theme as yours. It's about a porcelain rabbit who learns the emotions of humans. If anything you should pick it up and read it so that you can make your story different and fresh - it may look like a long book, but believe me you can finish it in about an hour.
2006-11-24 14:08:57 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
yeah it would be a great book/story. i know i would read it. but be careful because there are some story's like it but yeah it sounds like an awsome plot. you should read books like it to make it new. and not to be a put down or to tell you how to write your own story but make sure to put a problem/solution and a lesson because i and most people mess up there but yeah it would be a really great story that people of all ages would want to read. have fun and good luck ! i hope it turns out good. i think that's all but i know I'm forgetting something, oh well, good luck :P
2006-11-24 14:46:16 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
That sounds great and so many different story lines..but the first thing that came to mind was a child story...
Go for and good luck!
2006-11-24 13:58:23 · answer #4 · answered by darcy m 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it sounds cute, but yes it needs more depth in plot. A lesson perhaps. Conflict, and solution. Reason. I'd say it could be a good story tho! good luck
2006-11-24 17:52:21 · answer #5 · answered by ♥Fire Storm♥ 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It certainly has potential, but really that's only the beginning. To have a complete summary you need to figure out what happens to him.
2006-11-24 14:01:01 · answer #6 · answered by tabithap 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sounds quite interesting yes
2006-11-24 13:56:44 · answer #7 · answered by Sir Sidney Snot 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It is a start, but what is the conflict Wish will discover?
Will s/he discover that they are rejected by both cultures? And who will challenge said rabbit changeling?
2006-11-24 14:05:56 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
1st you need more depth to it if you want it to be an elementary story but if you want it to be a childs story that sounds really great but you need something that happens to rabbit man so he learns a lesson
2006-11-24 14:04:29 · answer #9 · answered by dizzy D 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I think it's a GREAT(not good,GREAT) plot and I wish you good luck in making your story
2006-11-24 14:03:48 · answer #10 · answered by Nevermind 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋