A random poem I wrote
Glancing from corridor to corridor
I vividly see flashbacks
Of tragedies and mysteries
The saddened man plunging his metal
Into my flesh
Crimson red fluid flows down my arms
Seeping through my sleeves
No words spoken
Thoughts obvious
The man grabbed my weak body
Taking me to the unknown
Waking up caged
I noticed him silently weeping
I questioned his burden
And why his morals are so low
He looked up at me
Shaking his head in sorrow
Unknowing what to say
I start a conversation with him
He spoke only once
The words will everlastingly haunt me forever.
2006-11-22 15:11:57 · 6 answers · asked by Skye R 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
I like that, its mysterious. also a little depressing, but hey, its good!!
2006-11-22 15:14:55 · answer #1 · answered by oopsydaisy500 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Interesting
2006-11-22 23:21:12 · answer #2 · answered by Cas 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Interesting, but I'm not sure what the meaning could be. Is it is like an abduction?
2006-11-23 02:18:15 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Reminds me of a scary movie, but I like it!
2006-11-22 23:19:58 · answer #4 · answered by Annieo 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
awesome mate...you can make a song out of it....you just have to find the right tune...just like Pearl jam songs...goodluck
2006-11-22 23:21:09 · answer #5 · answered by Jendralus 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
good poem, there was alot of sorrow and feeling in it which made it even more realistic and likable...
2006-11-23 01:51:46 · answer #6 · answered by MidnightSkies 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋