I wrote this poem for my parents for a christmas present is it good or at least descent
Going shopping or
Snowmobiling till were done
Everything we do is always so much fun
Making dinner or
Working on a car
I will always help you no matter how far
Going to family parties or
Just a little get together
Being will you always makes me feel better
Going on walks or
Hanging out a home
I will always know that I will never be alone
The laughs that we share and
The times that we have
I will love you forever because you’re my mom and dad
2006-11-22 12:49:55 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
how wonderful for your to write them a poem I am sure that they will be thrilled with it a treasure it always you might change the last line to read For the times that we have had I will love your forever be because your are my mom and dad
How nice to have a daughter who will put her feelings into words and yes the poem is great keep writhing your feeling about your family they will be gone one of these days and looking back into your journal of poems will be very special for you
2006-11-22 12:57:19 · answer #1 · answered by doc 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I love it, its great! other christmas presents for parents might be:
Condoms, Birth Control nah Jk i like the poem though.
2006-11-22 12:53:37 · answer #2 · answered by Xanthous 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
frame this poem and give to your parents for Christmas or better still just live and show them how much you appreciate them.
2006-11-22 13:29:39 · answer #3 · answered by princess ana j 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats a really nice poem!
2006-11-22 12:51:38 · answer #4 · answered by heartcore 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cute...they'll love it because it is from your heart
I like the rhyme pattern
2006-11-22 12:54:23 · answer #5 · answered by cheergirl5602 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's really nice.
Maybe you should type it on really nice paper and frame it.
2006-11-22 12:56:23 · answer #6 · answered by besitos2610 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes thats fantastic
2006-11-22 12:52:22 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice
2006-11-22 12:54:44 · answer #8 · answered by Learner 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋