Going shopping or
Snowmobiling till were done
Everything we do is always so much fun
Making dinner or
Working on a car
I will always help you no matter how far
Going to family parties or
Just a little get together
Being will you always makes me feel better
Going on walks or
Hanging out a home
I will always know that I will never be alone
The laughs that we share and
The times that we have
I will love you forever because you’re my mom and dad
2006-11-22 12:24:10 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
Very good representational poem. You can bring back poetry to the people, if you keep writing.
PS Avoid post-modernism as you would the plague.
2006-11-22 13:51:10 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sweet! It's good to notice that there are some of us who look at the positive things in life, rather than reflecting on the negative ones (like most people do).
Mom and Dad
I hope you heard that.
Thank you for the times
Cherished forever, they are mine.
2006-11-22 22:24:46 · answer #2 · answered by TK 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Writing generic poetry
Not stopping till we were done
Everything we do is so much fun
Making no rhymes
Or using to much "or"
I will always help you no matter how far
Posting it on Yahoo
Or to whoever will read
Reading this poem will make them ill
Until I cry or
Stop reading
I will always know your poetry is bland
It will bore me to death and
If i will survive
I will tell everyone not to read your poetry
2006-11-23 01:12:30 · answer #3 · answered by hq3 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Always room for improvement.
2006-11-23 05:52:06 · answer #4 · answered by Saffren 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
thats cute. nice poem. i write poems also. i've written 55 so far.
2006-11-22 21:01:39 · answer #5 · answered by snappypappy797 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋