Hello I am i the 7th grade and I am turning in a poster board project. Can Someone please tell me if the grammar & pucation is correct. If Not Can You Give me the corrected paragraph. Thanks
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After reading this board many of you may want to know what a Serval looks like. Well a Serval is a cat with long feet and brown fur with black spots. Most Servals are about 20-40 pounds in weight.
2006-11-22 10:59:55 · 6 answers · asked by maytag 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
After reading this board many of you may want to know what a Serval looks like. Well a Serval is a cat with long feet and brown fur with black spots. Most Servals are about 20-40 pounds in weight.
After reading this board, many of you may want to know what a Serval looks like, well a Serval is a cat with long feet and brown fur with black spots. Most Servals are about 20 to 40lbs in weight.
2006-11-22 11:03:00 · answer #1 · answered by pakachuchu 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
After reading this board many of you may want to know what a Serval looks like. A Serval is a cat with long feet and brown fur with black spots. Most Servals are BETWEEN 20 and 40 pounds in weight.
Most of them cannot be 20-40 pounds in weight. They are within that range.
2006-11-22 11:09:51 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
It should look like this:
(indent) After reading this board, many of you may want to know what a Serval looks like. Well, a Serval is a cat with long feet and brown fur with black spots. Most Servals are about 20-40 pounds in weight.
2006-11-22 11:02:42 · answer #3 · answered by Izzy 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
After reading this board, many of you may want to know what a Serval looks like. A Serval is a cat with long feet and brown fur with black spots. Most Servals are about 20-40 pounds in weight.
(I just made two minor changes. I tok out "well" because it is too conversational.)
2006-11-22 11:02:33 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
I'm not going to say what everybody else did, but just make the whole thing sound better. Wild Servals are found in many parts of the world; mostly in the middle and southern region of Africa. Servals usually have their homes located near grassy savannas.
2016-03-29 06:04:58 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
maytag Your story? Very interesting......
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2006-11-22 11:14:35 · answer #6 · answered by lqd o 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋