How should every girl be treated
As if without her you're not completed
And when her world is rocked with emotion
She should feel our unswaying devotion
And when she wants more and more
Still we'll hold that open door
And when her world is coming apart
She will know she still has our heart
I hope this get's the attention of the right girl so she will contact me too.
2006-11-22 07:19:42 · 6 answers · asked by dwsum41@yahoo.com 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
If she likes you, she will like the poem.
2006-11-22 07:27:17 · answer #1 · answered by amy02 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Personally, I think it is too clingy sounding. I don't want some guy thinking his life isn't complete without me in it. I don't make your world go round and am not responsible for your happiness. I don't want that kind of pressure. That poem is scary.
2006-11-22 15:28:16 · answer #2 · answered by Zelda 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm touched by your thoughtfulness. Not only is just writing a poem very nice, but yours is very sincere and helpful. I see your protectiveness for her. I would only suggest one thing ... and that's to define your needs and hers. On one hand you need her to fill your void, but then state she has the need because her world is coming apart. You might need to be a whole you onto yourself to help her. Your needs for completion this instant might be secondary.
2006-11-22 15:30:55 · answer #3 · answered by agarvey2 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i liked ur poem alot... im sure u will get girls lined up to ur door. haha just kidding.... but yeah im sure ur a great guy who will love ur girl and i like it.
2006-11-22 17:52:48 · answer #4 · answered by stranger4u 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was sweet...if only more men thought the way you do....Good luck with your sweetie.
2006-11-22 15:22:19 · answer #5 · answered by Lovely B 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's very sweet. It should be a song or something...
2006-11-22 16:02:25 · answer #6 · answered by Zealotta 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋