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II'm looking to write a poem about a girl and I'm looking to compare her to something that is beautiful. Something creative, but beautiful. So the birth of children and things like that are not applicable (for the most part). But we're going for poetry here.

2006-11-22 06:04:17 · 16 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities Other - Arts & Humanities

IT NEEDS TO BE AMAZING CONNECTION!! NOT FLOWERS OR STARS. DIFFERENT.

2006-11-22 06:08:31 · update #1

16 answers

wow, you sound creative.
compare her to chocolate as it melts in your mouth..
the color of the sky JUST before it starts getting light by the sun at dawn..
the patterns made from cigarette smoke,
the little colored stripes of rainbow at the edge of your freshly cleaned mirror,
the feel of a warm breeze of breath near your face, in a cold night,
the sound of rain on the rooftop ay night.
a little kitten playin with some string..
the smell of fresh coffee..
the smell of fresh bread..
the smell of the swearter of someone you love..
the way butterflies circle around.
the way the full moon looks in a clear summer night sky.
the color of clouds as they go all pink & red with sunset..
the sound of your favorite song in the background as you talk to your girl on the phone..
compare her to her perfume.. feminine & seductive..
compare her to good intentions, sweet dreams & passion..

I hope you get your inspiration soon,
good luck.

2006-11-22 06:13:35 · answer #1 · answered by Whatever 3 · 2 0

I feel almost anything in its pure or natural state is not only beautiful but also truely amazing. Some examples that may help: How a waterfall may look, sound and smell. The sight of sunrise or sunset behind a snow-capped mountain top. The natural beauty and life within the Rain Forest. The sound of waves rolling in and out on a warm sandy beach. The sight and sound of a thundershower that stops as quickly as it started , only to leave an endless rainbow of colors in a bright sunshined filled sky, that only moments before was as dark and grey as if it had been filled with a deadly smoke. These are just a few things I find beauty in . I hope they help.

2006-11-22 14:52:52 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Sunlight glancing from a hawks wing
starshine on frost
shimmering sound of a waterfall
silence of a leafs slow descent
slow secret blooming of mushrooms
firey light of a foxes eyes
wriggling rainbow of trout swimming
low distant booming of thunder
blue white rage of lightening
looping delight of swallows winging home
rainbows colors folding into each other
forest swaying in storm
patient grinding of mountains growing

consider describing your feelings about her ... telling her how beautiful she is is great (always works for me) ... and women really like to hear about men's feelings ... and you can be very flexible and creative and really get off the map talking about feelings.

2006-11-22 18:14:41 · answer #3 · answered by heart o' gold 7 · 0 0

Everything around us is beautiful, creation itself. People having the ability and knowledge to love and be kind to one another. To touch something soft, smell something sweet, hearing a babies cries for the first time, or seeing a beautiful smile on someones face whom you made happy, it's everywhere to be seen , touched, smelt, and heard.

2006-11-22 14:21:41 · answer #4 · answered by SHEILA N 3 · 0 0

Flowers, Springtime, birds

2006-11-22 14:12:15 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

How about shimmering light or a Spring day or a Summer twilight or music or birdsong or sparkling jewels. . . Just meditate on what truly touches your soul, and go from there.

2006-11-22 14:06:03 · answer #6 · answered by Meandering Mind 2 · 0 0

cool crisp Autumn mornings ,or wild storm tossed waves crashing on to a cliff lined shore to describe her moods or the steely blue Grey of a storm for her eyes . nature has beauty in all it's wild forms.

2006-11-22 14:10:30 · answer #7 · answered by territheterribleliar 4 · 0 0

compare her to a flower or the sky or even something that u think of as pretty.

2006-11-22 14:07:30 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

her smile lights up her face as the rays of sun open the heavens at sunrise.

2006-11-22 14:08:12 · answer #9 · answered by bootsjeansnpearls 4 · 0 0

A royal flush

2006-11-22 14:10:23 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

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