(Series 2 )I apply for the job ^^ Correct my sheets, please?

Question

(if i apply for a sales assistant at Virgin megastore )
Here's your chance to tell us some other things about yourself,i.e.previous work, skills or experience that you have that would make tou suitable for a job.
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I'm Sociable and positive. Always I became a member of team. I've attempted to establish the harmonious relationship with other staffs. Also at working, I did my best so that team could get its best result,

What attracted you to apply for at Virgin Megastores?
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I've been in london for 3 months. Actually I've got to study in london for 11 months. I want to challenge everything so that london life might be a last opportunity in all my lives. So, Especially I'd like to have any experience of Virgin Megastores.

Tell us about your interests outside of work.
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Usually I wake up at 6 and jog for 30 mins

Do you have any other work, study commitments that could affect your availability for work?
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Yes, I have general English course at Malvern school

Answer 1

You need to check your grammar I can understand what you want to say.try

I am at my best when working within a team environment, I do my best at all time to ensure that I am a team player and and work very hard at making sure I get on with my work colleagues, I enjoy the challenge of meeting targets given to me but endeavour to make sure it is not to the detriment of the other team members.
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I feel that I could bring a cultural exchange to Virgin Mega stores as I am at present studying in London and wish to take this opportunity to experience all that London has to give. I have been told that Virgin Mega stores is a very good company to work for as they ensure their employee's are placed in positions that fit their capabilities and also allow them to grow and learn within the company structure.
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I enjoy out door pursuits my main interest is jogging as I find this keeps me fit.
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I am at present studying English at Malvern school.

Answer 2

Here's your chance to tell us some other things about yourself,i.e.previous work, skills or experience that you have that would make tou suitable for a job.
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I'm Sociable and positive. I enjoy working as part of a team and always strive to establish harmonious relationships with other members of the team. I always do my best so that the team can get its best result.

What attracted you to apply for at Virgin Megastores?
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I've been in london for 3 months. I want to experience everything that london life has to offer. I'd especially like to gain experience as an employee of Virgin Megastores because.....

Tell us about your interests outside of work.
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I enjoy jogging, (add more here eg. reading, writing, sight seeing etc)

Do you have any other work, study commitments that could affect your availability for work?
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Yes, I am currently studying an English course at Malvern school (state times you are unavailable)

Best of Luck :o)

Answer 3

thats sounds good 2 me
shame i aint manager of store u applied in though lol