I suppose my mother was grown up with grandparent's love. As for her circumstances when she is a child, my grandparents have four sons and three daughters, and she is the youngest children.
For that reason, she has a lot of elder sisters and brothers, but I think she can't have taken all of their affections because her elder bothers are very older than her, so they must have had not enough time to care her. For an interesting instance, many of my cousins are approximately 18years older than me.
There home must have been neither wealthy nor poor. I think my grandfather might have mainly worked as a farmer and bred animals like chickens and pigs for incidental expenses. Even their home was not wealthy, they must have brought her up without any big financial problems, so her affections to her parents was highly large, and she therefore always worried about old her parent's health. When grandfather was dead, she cried like the home would be swept away.
IS THERE ANY GRAMMAR PROBLEM
2006-11-21 21:45:13 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
correct my poor sentences plz. I need your help . u may change sentences entirely if u can make better sentences
2006-11-21 21:45:56 · update #1
but plz do not delete "must have p.p" or
"might have p.p" or "can't have p.p"
because I must use them
2006-11-21 21:51:50 · update #2
I'm guessing lol
I rarely know about her life coz I havent asked it,
2006-11-21 22:09:59 · update #3
My mother must have grown up surrounded by my grandparents 's love. She grew up with four brothers and three sisters, and, out of the whole family, she was the youngest.
You might think it an advantage to have a lot of elder sisters and brothers, but as they were much older than her (I have cousins who are 18 years my senior), and concequently very busy, they probably didn't pay her much attention as a child.
Their home must have been neither wealthy nor poor. I think my grandfather might have worked mainly as a farmer, and bred animals like chickens and pigs to earn a little extra income . Even through their home was not wealthy, they must have brought her up without the burden of any major financial problems. As a result, she was very affectionate towards her parents. She loved them dearly, and would constantly worry about their health. When grandfather died, she cried as if her home would be swept away.
It was totally understandable the way you had it written, however, there were some minor grammar mistakes. I tried to stay as true to the original as possible.
2006-11-21 22:00:27 · answer #1 · answered by tekn33k 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
To start with, it's "brought up" not "grown up". ....when she WAS a child....
MUCH not "very" older than her
"For an interesting instance..." that does not make any sense.
I hope this helps you. There are more problems but I don't have the time nor energy to continue.
2006-11-22 05:55:07 · answer #2 · answered by custers_nemesis 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"can't have taken all of their affections" should be something like "can't have had a great deal of affection from them".
"There home" should be "Their home" (as you write correctly elsewhere!)
"her affections to her parents was highly large" should be something like "she loved her parents a lot".
2006-11-22 05:58:59 · answer #3 · answered by Sangmo 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋