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I suppose my mother was grown up with grandparent's love. As for her circumstances when she is a child, my grandparents have four sons and three daughters, and she is the youngest children.
For that reason, she has a lot of elder sisters and brothers, but I think she can't have taken all of their affections because her elder bothers are very older than her, so they must have had not enough time to care her. For an interesting instance, many of my cousins are approximately 18years older than me.
There home must have been neither wealthy nor poor. I think my grandfather might have mainly worked as a farmer and bred animals like chickens and pigs for incidental expenses. Even their home was not wealthy, they must have brought her up without any big financial problems, so her affections to her parents was highly large, and she therefore always worried about old her parent's health. When grandfather was dead, she cried like the home would be swept away.
IS THERE ANY GRAMMAR PROBLEM

PLZ HELP ME.u may change entirely if u can make better sentences, or u can change the words

Answer 1

I suppose my mother was raised with grandparent's love.

As for her circumstances, when she was a child her grandparents had four sons and three daughters. She was the youngest child. For that reason, she has a lot of elder sisters and brothers.

I think she can't have engaged all of their affection's. Her elder bothers are so much older than her they must not have had a lot of time to bond with her. As an interesting example of the age difference, many of my cousins are approximately 18 years older than me.

Their home must neither have been wealthy nor poor. I think my grandfather might have mainly worked as a farmer and bred animals like chickens and pigs for incidental expenses. Even though their home was not wealthy, they brought her up without any big financial problems.

Her affection for her parents was great, and she therefore always worried about her old parent's health. When grandfather died, she cried like the home would be swept away.

Answer 2

"My mother grew up in a home of love. My grandparents had four sons and three daughters. My mother was the youngest. Some of her brothers and sisters were much older than my mother. Some of my cousins today are as much as eighteen years older than I am. How close and affectionate they all must have been as they were growing up with such differences in ages, one cannot know.
Their home was neither wealthy nor poor. My grandfather probably farmed and bred animals such as chickens and pigs for incidental expenses. Even their furniture and personal belongings were modest. But, there were no financial worries. My mother enjoyed a safe and simple life. And, she loved her parents very much. She worried for their health. And, when her father died, my mother cried as though the home would be swept away in tears."

Answer 3

My mother had grown up in my grandparents home, where there was four sons and three daughters. She was the youngest. and because she was the youngest its obvious that she would of taken their affection as the rest of the children were way older then her. The affection from my grandparents towards my mother was higly large.

Their home wasn't exactly what you would called posh. As they didn't have money to splash about. My grandfather worked as a farmer , and he bred animals such as chicken and pigs. So it is obvious that they weren't the wealthest family around so they obviously brought up my mother without any financial problems.

She loved my grandparents dearly but always worried about their health. But when my grandfather past away, my mother cried as if her life had come crashing down on her.

Answer 4

i think u need not write children after youngest,because u r talking about children.why did u use "for" everywhere unnecessarily or as a habit?u can substitute with another word.
why did u write "think" & expressed a doubt about ur grandpa's occupation? in the last but one sentence,u wrote "about old her parent's health" that's not correct.it's "about her old parents health"its not "was dead".its "died".

Answer 5

Go back to school

Answer 6

Yes...