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An embarrassing experience
The most embarrassing experience to me is that I went out for dinner without taking money. One day, I had a dinner with a man. I was dressed up for the date and yet I didn't take any money. We really had a good time. Unfortunately, he got a emergency call and he left as soon as I response. After he left, I realized I had no money to pay for the bill and it hardly to sit there one more minute. Finally I called my father for help and ever since then I always carry money with me.
2006-11-21 19:21:39 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Hi-Pretty good. Just a few minor changes:
The most embarrassing experience I have ever encountered was when I once went out for dinner without taking money. One day, I had a dinner with a man. I was dressed up for the occasion but didn't take any money. We had a really good time. Unfortunately, he received an emergency call and had to leave immediately. After he left, I realized I had no money to pay for the bill and didn't know what to do. Finally, I decided to call my father to help me, and ever since then I've always carried money with me.
2006-11-21 19:30:56 · answer #1 · answered by Just another nickname 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
The most embarrassing experience I had was the night when I wnet out for dinner with a man without taking any money. I was dressed up for dinner but I didnt take any money. We realy had a good time till he got an emergency call and had to leave soon. After he left, I realized that I had no money to pay for the bill and it was not pleasant to sit there any more.Finally i had to call my father for a help and from then forth I always take money with myself.
2006-11-21 19:56:25 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The most...One day, I had dinner...Unfortunately, he got an emergency call and he left as soon as he could. After he left, I realized I had no money to pay for the bill and I could hardly sit there for one more minute.Finally...
2006-11-21 19:42:14 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋