Something's wrong cause my head is spinning
Today I realized you were winning
For you it's always been war
everyone thinks you've gone, way to far.
It's the world's end.
It's nothing I could ever mend.
I guess it's just to late,
to change the Earths' fate
Something's wrong cause my head is spinning
Today I realized you were winning
For you it's always been war
everyone thinks you've gone, way to far.
I guess its a major destruction
It will never again function
I guess wwe'll just all have to chill,
even if it's not our last will.
2006-11-21 07:59:14 · 3 answers · asked by Aliza 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Also say if you think some verses need to be changed and what you think I should change them to.
2006-11-21 07:59:53 · update #1
I gave it to my friends without them knowing I wrote it to see what they thought of it. They thought it was horrable but that's ok
2006-11-21 08:08:19 · update #2
it's ok...but i don't like the last stanza...i don't like verses beginning with "i guess",way too flat and common but i love the "war" thing...
2006-11-21 08:06:43 · answer #1 · answered by Billie 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Did you write that?
It's pretty good!
I wouldn't change any of it.....
And keep writing more.â¥
2006-11-21 16:05:59 · answer #2 · answered by dyingatwork 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i dont know
2006-11-21 16:08:19 · answer #3 · answered by stargirl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋