I watched yesterday and waited for love,
he never showed up.
I watched yesterday and waited for passion,
but I wasn't passionate enough
I watched yesterday and waited for hope.
But she never came through the door
Why has thou abandoned me,
when I need thee evermore.
I listened for a sign
but nothing said a word
I waited for a vision
but that thought was obsured.
Then I felt a breeze soft and sincere
and then I knew my love was near.
That's when I saw you
and that glisten in your eyes
and that's when I knew
I had won my prize.
So now as we sit happily face to face
I want you to know you were truly worth the wait.
Here's another poem off the top of my head. How does it sound? Do you think I was born to write because I think it is my calling!!
2006-11-21 01:36:17 · 15 answers · asked by askandilltell 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Pretty boring.
Coach
2006-11-21 01:43:27 · answer #1 · answered by Thanks for the Yahoo Jacket 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
its sounds nice tiffany, always write from the heart and you will never go wrong. Im sorry you sound so sad. dont be sad life is like that sometimes in order to apperciate the good times we have to go through bad times. Always remember like is want you make it.
2016-05-22 06:02:00 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
submit at poetry. com and look up the following poem : unloved by tanya marie harris, i am up for an award and i am also being published in a book from the international library of poetrty
2006-11-21 01:46:52 · answer #3 · answered by tanyamarie23 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If it is in your heart to write poetry, Fabulous.
You are off to a great start.
It would be good to take some classes in writing and poetry to help you grow at your craft.
Good Luck.
2006-11-21 01:47:18 · answer #4 · answered by ? 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its a nice poem. You certainly have a gift for writing. If you think you should persue it go for it!! Good luck and good for you in taking off with your dream!!
2006-11-21 02:04:42 · answer #5 · answered by Luv My Corgi 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your poems have a lot of meaning in them...I felt Sweet Little Girl. Your good at what you do!
2006-11-21 04:21:30 · answer #6 · answered by vee 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love the poem.
BTW a possible typo, but I think you meant "I waited for a vision but that thought was OBSCURED not obsured"
2006-11-21 01:46:05 · answer #7 · answered by jennyreigle 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow that was really good. you show write for a living! i would buy it. I'm learn how to write poems and stories and stuff maybe you can teach me
2006-11-21 02:19:17 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good.
If you feel its your calling then you don't need people's opinions as its what you feel you were meant to do!
2006-11-21 01:39:31 · answer #9 · answered by Little miss naughty 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you have a gift, but don't let it get to your head. people who do that usually have a hard time taking suggestions
2006-11-21 01:40:52 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋