I didn’t want to leave my family behind, not when I hadn’t had a chance to tell them how much I loved them.
2006-11-20 17:30:54 · 8 answers · asked by sose k 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
How about "I changed my mind and decided to stay."
[grin]
2006-11-20 18:23:42 · answer #1 · answered by All who wonder are not lost 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I did not want to leave my family behind when I'd had no chance to say, "I love you".
2006-11-21 01:34:06 · answer #2 · answered by ignoramus 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I didn't want to leave my family, especially when I previously had no chance to express my unending love for them.
i hope u like it!
2006-11-21 01:35:50 · answer #3 · answered by Maggieee:] 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I did not want to move away before I told my family that I loved them.
D.
2006-11-21 01:34:35 · answer #4 · answered by Dan S 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Try inserting an adverb, such as:
"I didn't want to leave my family behind, especially when.."
or "I didn't want to leave my family behind, particularly when..."
2006-11-21 02:06:15 · answer #5 · answered by drmdlean 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hi SoSe, You did it again... You don't need any changes.Your doing very well.
Clowmy
2006-11-21 01:39:03 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't use a "double negative"! Remove ", not" and just have "...behind when I hadn't..."
2006-11-21 01:34:23 · answer #7 · answered by David A 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You can re-word it in different ways but it's great just as it is (just like your other one).
2006-11-21 01:33:28 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋