When my parents came home that night I could tell from their ashen faces and swollen eyes that my gut feeling was right.
2006-11-20 17:15:11 · 11 answers · asked by sose k 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
I think it sounds good just as it is. Very descriptive, grammatically correct and no spelling errors!
2006-11-20 17:20:40 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That night, when my parents came home, one look at their ashen faces and swollen eyes told me my gut feeling was right.
2006-11-20 17:27:33 · answer #2 · answered by sillkee1 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
When my parents came in through the door, I could immediately tell by their ashen faces and swollen faces that my gut feeling had been unfortunately right.
i hope u like this one 2!
2006-11-20 17:38:02 · answer #3 · answered by Maggieee:] 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
When my parents came home that night, i coould tell. I had a gut feeling about what happened, and their ashen faces and swollen eyes revealed what i suspected.
2006-11-20 17:27:12 · answer #4 · answered by phtokhos 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That night, I knew my intuition was correct when my parents arrived home, eyes swollen and faces ashen.
2006-11-20 17:22:51 · answer #5 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ashen faces and swollen eyes from my parents, confirmed that my assumption was right?
that's all i could come up with?
2006-11-20 17:22:19 · answer #6 · answered by mac15 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
just one look at my ashen faced parents,their swollen eyes,how the paleness of their skin shone as they walked through the door,though i had prayed to be wrong
i knew instantly, my gut feeling was indeed, correct.
2006-11-20 17:32:07 · answer #7 · answered by ''H'' 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
When my parents returned home, I could see by the look of them that my gut feeling right.
The look on my parents faces as they came through the door confirmed my gut feeling. (Then put the info in that follows) Matt was dead. (Or whatever)
2006-11-20 17:21:13 · answer #8 · answered by Rich B 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Hi SoSe, Very nice writing. I like it the way it is now. You don't need any changes. Are you doing a project for school??? or are you trying to write a book??? Which ever it is you will do well.
Clowmy
2006-11-20 17:33:12 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
a million yet dont repeat criminal. "at the same time as working in direction of my LLB degree on the college of Leicester, I found out suitable criminal reasoning skills which HAS critically more suitable my skill to remedy issues linked with THE regulation." sounds much less repetitive imo, yet its wonderful as is only too!
2016-11-25 22:15:38 · answer #10 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋