I need help in writting an essay! I an writting a personal narrative! Any quotes or ideas on how should i start writting about when i went to yosemite last year but i wanted to started woth a quote! Please HELP MEEEEEEE!!!!
2006-11-20 16:31:06 · 8 answers · asked by pink princess 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Here's what my English teacher suggested:
Sentences 1-2 or 1-3: "Hook" (something that catches the reader's attention)
Setence 3 or 4: "Transition" (a question/statement that ends the hook)
Sentence 4 or 5: "Thesis" (the main idea of the essay)
Here's an example:
"The hole in the ground sat dormant. Everyone watched with anticipation. Suddenly, A great blast of steaming water gushed out of it like a cannon, firing high into the air! What just happened? My trip to Yosemite was great because blah blah blah..."
Isn't Old Faithful in Yosemite? Or was it Yellowstone? Well, you get the idea.
2006-11-20 16:36:37 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The best memories are the one's you can't explain; you just had to be there. That's a good quote to start your essay about yosemite because it must have been a memorable trip.
2006-11-21 00:34:15 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You should start it ask with in a quote like"I really liked when I went to Yosemite last year."Then like show how much you liked going there(if you had liked going there)
2006-11-21 00:46:21 · answer #3 · answered by May N 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
As I hammered in the last bolt and staggered over the rim, it was not at all clear to me who was the conqueror and who was the conquered. I do recall that El Cap seemed to be in much better condition than I was." — Warren Harding ( -2002).
This has got some great pictures too on this site. and great info.
http://www.gdargaud.net/Climbing/Yosemite.html
2006-11-21 00:41:23 · answer #4 · answered by dianehaggart 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pick a quote from your favorite author!
2006-11-21 00:32:28 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
read some nobel and quote them.
2006-11-21 00:57:21 · answer #6 · answered by tareq 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
um yea start talkin about urself and i bet everyone will like it
2006-11-21 00:35:13 · answer #7 · answered by CHICHO 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You could start off with: I really enjoyed my trip to City/Town,State last year because______________________.
2006-11-21 00:34:54 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋