What are horses?
They are the key to our past.
The creatures that where once brought by the Europeans, All of our ancestors where horseman, weather they where slaves, cowboys, Indians, farmers, or teachers.
They where used for transportation and tractors.
They started the car, the horsepower, and the buggy, all which where used by our ancestors.
The horses never gave up. It was we.
We gave up on them.
Now used for dressage, jumper, heavy riding.
Never let go on what horses once where, America’s past.
Let the wild run wild, and Let the tamed be free.
Don’t let us hold them down.
On once what, where wild horses.
All the bays, blacks, greys, blues, reds, and all the breeds.
Let the horses run free. Let them live the past.
Don’t make them suffer through endurance.
Just hop on their backs and ride.
Let the free run free, and let the wars go on.
All horses must live because they are the key.
Just let them be.
2006-11-20 13:27:37 · 11 answers · asked by razzy_horse 2 in Pets ➔ Other - Pets
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2006-11-20 13:36:07 · update #1
A LITTLE LONG BUT NICE I GIVE IT AN EIGHT ON A SCALE OF 10!
2006-11-20 13:35:30 · answer #1 · answered by serestmar 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
So the point of this poem is for the horses to be let free, but also relating it to american history?
I give it a 7 out of 10
2006-11-20 14:09:43 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great poem and you get a 10 for effort and wording. It's true that people gave up on horses and what they did for people in the past.
2006-11-20 13:37:05 · answer #3 · answered by AMPLette 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This poem is very good. I would rate it on a scale of 1-10 probably a 9 because I think you repeat a couple of words to much. But, this poem is very well written.
2006-11-20 13:37:43 · answer #4 · answered by Kendall C 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i'm a released poet, even though technologies isnt my ingredient so I cant help with the particular content textile of the poem. yet i can assist with the choose the flow. only attempt to hold a similar quantity of syllables in each and every line, and make the beats greater healthy. yet whilst it is for technologies attractiveness i doubt that the instructor cares approximately that. sounds like a passing grade to me.
2016-12-30 16:25:23 · answer #5 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice
2006-11-20 13:35:23 · answer #6 · answered by Lil' Gay Monster 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
to rate your poem:
you didn't give a scale, so I"m a make up my own.
On a scale of 1 to pi, that is, your rank, "r" being an element of (1, pi), would have to be about pi by two, that is, pi/2, or half way along the defined interval.
2006-11-20 13:33:00 · answer #7 · answered by Paul W 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
umm. i would say 5 just because the end of it had really nothing to do with the being.. and it is like a paragragh i would read in one of my research papers..i'm not trying to be mean.. so i'm sorry..
2006-11-20 13:47:46 · answer #8 · answered by i love my son wyatt 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
7 out of 10
Good Point
2006-11-20 13:37:20 · answer #9 · answered by Josh 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Zero on content, zero on style, and zero on spelling. That's a very naive and inconsistent philosophy you have there - I hope you're 10.
2006-11-20 16:38:14 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋