I never thought, it'd be me
running around soothing your every need
Cause I never knew, you'd be this way
enjoying to boss me all day
I guess I can't wait to be in my room
oh great another 600years of doom
But one day, I know, you'll be sorry when I'm gone
Cause I knew you never liked me anyway
I knew I just drived you crazy
But remember the time I came over?
You just said that I was sober...
I never thought, it'd be me
running around soothing your every need
Cause I never knew, you'd be this way
enjoying to boss me all day
I guess I can't wait to be in my room
oh great another 600years of doom
But one day, I know, you'll be sorry when I'm gone
I treated you like a goddess,
I knew you'd never be that modest
And now its the end of the song,
Didn't you hate it all along?
2006-11-20 13:19:31 · 17 answers · asked by Aliza 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
it's okay. But to be honest, needs a little work. I'm not trying to be mean or anything. I like it. It would probably sound better sung than read.
2006-11-20 13:23:54 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awesome
2006-11-20 21:21:19 · answer #2 · answered by ◙Blue-Eyed♥Red-Headed♥Bella◙ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey I really liked your song sounds like my previous marriage( lol!) I think it was great sounds like it is or was a personal life exsperience! it worded out very well. You can sing it to him when your gone I loved the part about in my room another 600 years ( ha! ha! ).
2006-11-20 21:28:16 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds good better than what another person wrote it sounded like he stepped on a cat's tail
2006-11-20 21:22:03 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's the 'Baby Got Back' for the Now generation!
2006-11-20 21:24:02 · answer #5 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
more like a vent poem. I could see you working that at a poetry cafe. It does not really have very singable lyrics though.
2006-11-20 21:22:05 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
great song. nice chorus, could be a hit. just make a catchy riff!
2006-11-20 21:21:00 · answer #7 · answered by wearetheggman86 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
love it great job i did something like that for poetry
2006-11-20 21:35:56 · answer #8 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I can't hear it. Where is the link to the sound?
2006-11-20 21:22:50 · answer #9 · answered by Yo it's Me 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is an awesome effort.
2006-11-20 21:23:18 · answer #10 · answered by CJBig 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋