You go beyond the do or die
Trying your worst beside my side
Your looking at me and im looking at you
Your actions deceive us leaving no clues
pulling through the thick and thin
doing it all over again and again
we as rats are blind oh blind
Hiding behind corners with everywhere to hide
At night we scatter to dig our own graves
Our time is near and we are just slaves
Tipping the guys on the corner with a handful of dust
We close our cloaked eyes and struggle to change
Beat me bruise me squeeze me tight
Scorch my bones with hot delight
And in the end ill be alone
Love me love me be a best to me
Pulling through the thick and thin
Doing it all over again and again
We as rats are starting to see
Coming out of corners with somewhere to be
The day has developed and the night is no more
Those men on the corner we can finally ignore
Im going out today to change my skin
Find a pretty woman and just pretend
2006-11-20 10:12:03 · 3 answers · asked by knowndebaser 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
It's interesting, as a poem I would have stopped at struggle to change as a song its fine to continue, Some grammatical and punctuation errors, I would accept it as a work in progress. :-) good luck and keep writing
2006-11-20 10:23:49 · answer #1 · answered by Just Thinking 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i'll give it a 4 stars!
it's good but i say dont quit ur work!!
2006-11-20 10:15:19 · answer #2 · answered by dude... 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i like it i think its sweet
2006-11-20 10:14:08 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋