i write songs for my band and im working on something with deeper meaning. what do you think so far?
it seems every day goes by without a trace
the next day somehow seems much too far away
living this long with no one to hold on to
is an accomplishment beyond belief in this state im in
nothing seems to go unwatched as my heart unravels and lets you in
lets run away, far away, where no one can find us ever again
2006-11-20 09:04:10 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
SO FAR,i LIKE WHAT YOU HAVE WRITTEN, lkeep writing be careful of the words the way they come together. It's sounds like the being of a Love song for Lovers, Go for it.
2006-11-20 09:26:18 · answer #1 · answered by silkieladyinthecity 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
great song keep going and it will be even better e-mail me when you make more of it whats our bands name are you the lead singer
2006-11-20 17:19:49 · answer #2 · answered by Breezy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it.
2006-11-20 17:11:56 · answer #3 · answered by StarWarsFanatic 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's too deep...sounds emo
2006-11-20 17:12:50 · answer #4 · answered by nαrcíssα [misses being a TC] 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You're off to a great start...way to go! Thanks for sharing.
2006-11-20 17:12:29 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋