its not finished
do u have any ideas i could use to make it better?
what do u think its about?
going dowm that road again
steering away from the path u have destined me, i hold my grip
and steer clear of what is to begin
with the lightest toucn and the possibility of an extreme to slip
overwhelming emotions and pain
everything i knew so wrong and far away
the things you taught me seem to go so far as to disapper
i cant understand why it had to be me that slips in and out of everyday
with the vison so clear
of what u only wanted me to be
and my heart is all i have bare before you
i break down and its only me
that hides behind the coldness and what is untrue
2006-11-20 07:16:31 · 6 answers · asked by sweet18apparatus 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
since no one has guessed what its about its about God
2006-11-20 07:22:05 · update #1
i give it an 8 cause im jealous now.
2006-11-20 07:20:16 · answer #1 · answered by manatee_love 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
4
2006-11-20 15:19:08 · answer #2 · answered by Rachel 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
8
2006-11-20 15:17:38 · answer #3 · answered by amberharris20022000 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
A perfect 10! You rock girl!
2006-11-20 15:18:19 · answer #4 · answered by SWORD LI 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i rate it zero
2006-11-20 15:18:26 · answer #5 · answered by Kelly Bundy 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
4................
2006-11-20 15:21:28 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋