i have asked this q b4 but please comment
We were best of friends,
Not too long ago,
Went through lots together,
Our friendship seemed to grow.
We drew closer and closer,
But now it isn't so,
Drifted apart gradually,
And mean thoughts seemed to flow.
Something must have happened,
And I didn't really know,
When I think about it,
I miss her more and more.
2006-11-20 02:11:34 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
well its about a girl who used to be my best friend and well we just stopped talking.. i dont know why...
2006-11-20 02:16:16 · update #1
comment on the poem pls..
2006-11-20 02:18:10 · update #2
actually i wrote this during english..
2006-11-20 02:32:52 · update #3
you lost a friend ? maybe lost touch or fought ? .................... so what are you doing about it ?
2006-11-20 02:14:03 · answer #1 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a good true friendship is hard to find , dont let it go to long before you speak, pick up the phone, send a text or be old fashioned and write a letter but if it is a true friendship then dont loose it .
2006-11-20 02:16:22 · answer #2 · answered by ninja 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-12-29 06:16:42 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
the poem is good; heartfelt. Send it to your friend. Let her know you miss her. Life's too short to dwell on something that may can be fixed.
2006-11-20 02:26:59 · answer #4 · answered by his_scarlett_ohara 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats what happened to my friendship with my best friend too
she basicly stoped talking to me because some new girl came around and lied about somethings and me and my friend fell out and we are not friends no more
2006-11-20 02:15:18 · answer #5 · answered by jay 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Are u telling me your poem or your feeling? well it is confusing to comment.
2006-11-20 02:16:05 · answer #6 · answered by Sarafriday 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds to me like u have major issues!!!!!!!!(lol) what exactly happened?
2006-11-20 02:15:30 · answer #7 · answered by psychopathic bi*ch. 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Do you want a comment on your poetic ability, please be honest.
2006-11-20 02:17:52 · answer #8 · answered by khayum p 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it was so0o0o nice.....
2006-11-20 02:24:03 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋