i wrote this one way back when I was with my ex..i like it and I've put a temporary copyright on it. should i record it and go all the way?
"Hollywood Girl"
Shes walking down the street
with those stilletos on her feet
and step after step after step shes turning heads.
Those glasses on her face.
Well theyre makin my heart race
and beat after beat after beat she knocks me dead.
My hollywood girl oh oh
You rock my world whoa oh
And I dont know what to do
I only wanna be with you
My hollywood girl oh ohh
Lets go!
Shes checkin out the guys
But when I catch those eyes
Oh shes gotta know, gotta know she leaves me breathless
Shes starring in my dreams
Straight from the big screen
Its gettin too hot and I dont think I can take it.
No, I cant take it!
(chorus)
and oh her love
its not scripted not scripted not scripted
and oh my love
its not scripted not scripted not scripted
(chorus)x2
well what do you think? its more of an upbeat song so you know.
2006-11-18 18:46:52 · 9 answers · asked by all_for.an_alibi 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
the singing style would be along the lines of Head Automatica's "beating heart baby" for those who have heard it. Real up beat and all over with the voice like that.
2006-11-18 18:51:49 · update #1
Awesome Lyrics - I knew it was an upbeat song right from the start. Go for it dude and Good Luck - I would buy it!!!
2006-11-18 18:49:40 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Awesome
2006-11-19 02:54:04 · answer #2 · answered by JOHNNY D 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I like it... A lot. I've never been a woah-oh kind of girl, but apart from that I think the lyrics are simply fantastic.
2006-11-19 03:06:20 · answer #3 · answered by Katrina 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i <3 beating heart baby so i think u should go for it =]
2006-11-19 02:55:42 · answer #4 · answered by Alexsis 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeah, pretty good. Not cheesy at all.
2006-11-19 02:52:58 · answer #5 · answered by Lilah 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would listen to it. Good song.
2006-11-19 02:51:07 · answer #6 · answered by TheOnlyOne_05 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow! not bad at all, I'd really say GOOOOOD!
2006-11-19 02:59:49 · answer #7 · answered by Funky* 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its cute go for it
2006-11-19 02:56:43 · answer #8 · answered by guitar_lady81 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
they're pretty good
2006-11-19 02:50:18 · answer #9 · answered by Jeramy Cosby 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋