"Your love is my sheild from this cold world and forever i will hide untill our hearts die."
“I feel like running away from it all, but I’ll just hide in ur heart until the day I die”
"Your hands is capturing every little pain inside of me; without you I hurt"
2006-11-18 18:05:31 · 12 answers · asked by Tbaby 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Marriage & Divorce
The first one is good but hears another one of my own you may like
"Your love is my guiding light in this world of darkness and I will forever surrender to it's glow."
2006-11-18 18:15:56 · answer #1 · answered by Livinrawguy 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That will have to be your decision my friend, but I would not pick #3, you should not tell someone the feeling you want with an opposite emotion. Although there isn't anything wrong with it, I think there would be more of a reaction to a more "loving comment" rather then somthing that has to do with pain, death, war, etc. as you have listed. Hear are two that I think you might like that are more geared towards "complete" love.
true love is forever love,
a love that never ends,
as two hearts grown toegther
as lovers, partners, and friends.
I love you
or
Our love is Forever
Leaves may change from green to gold,
the sky from blue to grey,
people change, Places change
& times keep changing too,
but one thing will always stay the same.
the LOVE I feel for you.
Although it may not sound as "pain staking" it allows for your partner to associate some of those feeling of love with whats written in the poem. I hope I was of some help.
2006-11-19 02:26:55 · answer #2 · answered by steven marton 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
“I feel like running away from it all, but I’ll just hide in ur heart until the day I die”
2006-11-19 02:08:58 · answer #3 · answered by Bryan M 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
As a choice the first one is it.
Sounds like a line from one of the soap operas.
2006-11-19 02:12:33 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
" the first one"
2006-11-19 02:07:52 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Since you asked, I have to pick the first one.
2006-11-19 02:10:18 · answer #6 · answered by jdhs 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The first one.... It makes more sense, and sounds more sincere. If my boyfriend said that to me I would blush!
2006-11-19 02:08:53 · answer #7 · answered by Ebony da *Dimepiece* 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i feel the three of them are very very good. but would choose the first one.
2006-11-19 02:10:54 · answer #8 · answered by Lubiafi 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
the third one
2006-11-19 02:09:43 · answer #9 · answered by *~butterfly~* 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
They are all overwritten, overstated bunch of crap. They sound very teenagery
2006-11-19 02:07:38 · answer #10 · answered by chris 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋