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I need 2 more lines at the end:


The birds are flying in the sky
The fish are swimming in the sea
I’ll swim so fast and fly so high
If only you were meant for me

If you were here with me tonight
I’d kiss you sweet and hug you tight
I’ll take you high I’ll take you low
And never ever let you go

Who can explain what makes it last
And why can’t I forget the past
….. …….. ……. ….. …………..
……. ………….. ……. …….

2006-11-18 11:29:48 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities Books & Authors

:) they are all shoo shweet, thank you people!

2006-11-18 11:46:42 · update #1

12 answers

But all I have is here with you
A love never old but always new

2006-11-18 11:32:44 · answer #1 · answered by Isis 7 · 0 1

I don't want to finish your poem, because then it would take away from it being YOUR poem....think of words that rhyme with last and past, maybe....

fast?
surpassed?

or two other words that rhyme with eachother (and not with, sky, sea, tight, or last), as this is the way you've organized the first 2 verses of your poem....

you can do it, just take your time...only two more lines!

2006-11-18 19:32:52 · answer #2 · answered by christina rose 4 · 0 1

It's hard to just forget the past to pass
It was good, it was bad but it was real
And that's all you get in the end of the matter
you can't escape my love

(i think it is good ) ( ;

2006-11-18 19:48:46 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

Your love is so sweet and pure,
I wish I just knew for sure.

OR:

but let's just try to move on,
and love from dusk til dawn.

2006-11-18 19:33:37 · answer #4 · answered by Yahoo Answerer 4 · 0 1

You mean the whole wide world to me
If only you could somehow see

2006-11-18 19:53:51 · answer #5 · answered by Maggz 4 · 0 1

The way you make me feel each day,
Makes me love you in my own way.

2006-11-18 19:39:00 · answer #6 · answered by Hellsdiner 3 · 0 0

I can't forget about you so
I love you; I just wanted to let you know



I just made it up

2006-11-18 19:32:31 · answer #7 · answered by Jessica 2 · 1 1

I guess I'll never know
But I wish you'll never leave me so.
The End!

2006-11-18 19:35:47 · answer #8 · answered by smallfrie 2 · 0 1

Dreams are nice, but better, dear
Is if one day you would be here

2006-11-18 19:36:10 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

But will you wait until I do,
Then ever, always, I'll choose you.

2006-11-18 19:53:38 · answer #10 · answered by downinthevalley45 2 · 0 1

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