proofread 4 mistakes?

Question

By selecting 4 or 5, they are opposed to the statement and if they choose “neutral” they are undecided. There were 4 questions that were used to measure lesbian attitudes. The first question reads “ I think female homosexuality is erotic”. If the respondent agrees with this statement, then he/she is accepting of lesbians. The second question is negative statement about lesbians, “I think female homosexuality should not be shown in the media”. The third sentence implies, “I think female homosexuality is a perversion”, by agreeing to this, the respondent is showing signs of homophobia. The 4th question is a statement about lesbians not fitting in with society, which is another negative statement about lesbians. If the respondent sides with questions 2-4, then he/she is displaying a high negative attitude towards female homosexuality. Questions 5 and 6 did not focus on specific gender questions but measured the student’s attitude towards homosexuality in general. How does this sound?

Answer 1

not enough questions and very unscientific and people lie all time.

Answer 2

The first sentence seems out of context.

In the second sentence, do you mean "lesbian attitudes" or "attitudes towards lesbianism"?

There should be a period, not a comma after "perversion"

"The 4th question is a statement about lesbians not fitting in with society, which is another negative statement about lesbians." should be reworded. You are stating the obvious in the second half of the sentence. Something like "The fourth question is a negative question about where the lesbian lifestyle fits in society."

Delete the second "questions" in the last sentence.

Just a general note, try to avoid the word "this", i.e. "...when agreeing to this...".

Answer 3

Sounds fine, however, there are some punctuation mistakes. The period at the end of your quotes should be inside of the quotes....."homosexuality is erotic." Also, when using the if/then you do not need to use a comma. If.........this statement then.... Spell out fourth instead of using 4th. Spell ot 5 and 6. Any time you are using numbers you should spell out any number 1 - 10 and use the numbers them selves for any number beyond ten.