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Strangers

When I was a kid, I envied Professor X
Still as I live, inner suspicions never rest
Fake or true: What am I to make of you?
All that they do for me, all the things they take me through
We may want the same things, but life ain’t bring
Enough for everybody: Lose or invite their blame
You smile is warm, but could be designed to disarm
Best way to check mate; now, I am your pawn
Liars and cons purposefully appear real
I try not to put that shoe on because it has a weird feel
But sometimes compelled to, when foresight says
That I used the truth and my plans fell through
Don’t want to tell you how to live your life
I just live life, never claimed to live it right
But to make mines wrong and his to be right
Throw me in the hole inside a prison of strife
If I don’t know it, I’ll never try to escape
Renting not owning; another designing my fate
Projectors, displacers, strategized anger
Pretend like best friends, but we’re more like strangers

2006-11-18 03:59:43 · 11 answers · asked by Subconsciousless 7 in Arts & Humanities Philosophy

11 answers

Cool rap, man.

You're making better use of your time than I am at work. Sucks to work on the weekend doesn't it?

Maybe I should write a rap:

Stuck at work on Saturday answering phones
Dealing with BS, surrounded by clones
To enjoy this hell I'd need a lobotomy
But I can't quit til I win the dam lottery!

or something like that...

Peace out!

:)

2006-11-18 04:53:47 · answer #1 · answered by amp 6 · 0 0

Old school

I liked :
"You smile is warm, but could be designed to disarm
Best way to check mate; now, I am your pawn"

and the last four lines are on point.

2006-11-18 07:16:44 · answer #2 · answered by -.- 4 · 0 0

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2016-10-15 17:15:39 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0 0

Ur just started to use Ur brain to see instead of your eyes!!!! but that's good , many people around U still use their eyes to see the environment , i really liked this bit of it>> Liars and cons purposefully appear real << But still wonder , what real appears to be ? simple! LIE!!!
Tc dude

2006-11-18 04:27:11 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

I lyked it! For some reason as I read it I heard Eminems voice shouting the words angrily. lol

2006-11-18 04:27:20 · answer #5 · answered by L-in 2 · 0 0

That's pretty much amazing. Great writing right there.

2006-11-18 07:17:37 · answer #6 · answered by SwimLove 4 · 0 0

How much of your employer's time did you steal to write that? Do you plan on reimbursing him for it?

2006-11-18 05:08:01 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0 2

That is some good stuff! I like that.

2006-11-18 04:04:47 · answer #8 · answered by me 6 · 0 0

thoughtful insightful

2006-11-18 04:09:25 · answer #9 · answered by hotnsassy 2 · 0 0

wow, I enjoyed reading it.

2006-11-18 06:36:40 · answer #10 · answered by anna 4 · 0 0

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