Exercise and improved physical health have been so widely heralded that it has become part of the subconscious of society
2006-11-18 03:42:19 · 11 answers · asked by pss4dm 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
"Exercise and improved physical health have been so widely
heralded that they have become ingrained in our society's subconsciousness."
2006-11-18 04:14:41 · answer #1 · answered by Polly 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
How about: the proven benefits of exercise on improving physical health have been so widely heralded that they have become part of society's subconscious?
2006-11-18 03:52:40 · answer #2 · answered by 60s Chick 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Grammatically it is fine. The thought being expressed sounds just a little awkward. I agree with the others about dropping the "subconscious" for clarity's sake. Maybe something like "... has become a part of general societal thinking."
2006-11-18 03:58:47 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Both excercise and improving physical health have both been so widely praised that they have become a part in the subconcious of society.
? Maybe? I don't know, just a suggestion.
2006-11-18 03:47:23 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The sentence probably makes more sense in context than it does when it's all alone. The writer is comparing cruelty to a jungle, which seems a little strange. But if we saw the rest of that piece of writing, we could see where the writer is going with that thought and the sentence wouldn't seem so weird.
2016-05-22 00:54:54 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Common subconscious might be a better choice than subconscious of society.
2006-11-18 03:53:32 · answer #6 · answered by Crash 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The current emphasis on exercise and improving one's physical health has been so strong that it has crept into the general mind-set of society at large.
2006-11-18 03:51:22 · answer #7 · answered by john s 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Almost perfect. But you need to change "it has" to "they have" to make "they have become part of the subconscious of society".
2006-11-18 03:51:33 · answer #8 · answered by Mr Ed 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The only word that seems out of place to me is subconscious because it is an adjective. I would replace it with subconsciousness, which is a noun.
2006-11-18 03:50:09 · answer #9 · answered by fcas80 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it, sounds a bit long tho...
2006-11-18 03:50:51 · answer #10 · answered by me 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋