The only reason I exist, is it to think and feel?
What if the essence of me, that which I am only now to see exist, what if it was to see the futility of thought and speech?
If that alone was not cause for my physical demise, would I still not live a life of death?
But to only experience myself die a thousand fold, is that not worth life?
To be without life nor death, contentment of sorrow, lovingly wicked, depressingly inspired... what is to be God is to be acknowledged.
That is to be you me, and anything else I desire, no longer shall we suffer together.
I will create and destroy you, mold you through yourselves, until my own madness should end. We are one.
I will squeeze the bloody life out of you until I understand my own. I will drop bombs on every aspect of myself until nothing exist. Until I no longer need to think and feel, time will cease to exist.
Then you will know me, address me as you would yourselves, for I am everything until you understand we are nothing.
2006-11-17 05:26:13 · 9 answers · asked by jonas_tripps_79 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
I ran out of space, I suppose it was meant to be.
2006-11-17 05:26:39 · update #1
i like this... kinda dark, but motivating in a way....makes me want to go out and do things...
2006-11-17 06:02:20 · answer #1 · answered by dindonelle 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hmm.. so i know its hard to figure out what other people mean exactly in poems, but it seems that you want to torture people until you understand why you are here? Or maybe you turned into a god viewpoint... Its good but the transition from that is to be you me... i think that one part needs some rewording
2006-11-17 05:44:50 · answer #2 · answered by im1canadain 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Hi. Well, pretty dark. The life you have is only going to last so many seconds. Make each one count.
2006-11-17 05:33:01 · answer #3 · answered by Cirric 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
dude ur soo deep that your torturing yourself...free yourself ...fck ur philosophy teacher hehe
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who cares whats the reason for my existence, at least i get to feel, even in pain, life. else i'l be a pile of dirt or whatevr matter that has no life... no feelings, no understanding, not depressed....**** dude ur making me like you lol
2006-11-17 05:30:01 · answer #4 · answered by xapao 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It is inspiring and truly well written. Continue to express yourself. It was good.
2006-11-17 06:17:17 · answer #5 · answered by Staci R 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A budding poet.
2006-11-18 04:08:00 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
that made my head hurt, i think you need a shot of tequila ,dude
2006-11-17 07:13:16 · answer #7 · answered by ? 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
to deep for me my brain cant seem to grasp all of that
2006-11-17 05:54:12 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
great, a nihilist.
2006-11-17 06:45:54 · answer #9 · answered by -.- 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋