poem
Four leaf clovers
Firelight
Shooting stars
Birds in flight
Tender words
Songs of love
An olive branch
A pure white dove
A star that shines
From afar
All I am
Is all you are
A thousand miles
A thousand tears
A love that did not
Fade through years
Goodbye my love
Fare the well
The time has come
To toll the bell
A star that shines
From afar
Will shine until
Light is no more
2006-11-16 13:45:14 · 9 answers · asked by crct2004 6 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I really like it. It's beautiful. If you wrote it you've got talent & I can't wait to see more of your work.
2006-11-16 13:51:38 · answer #1 · answered by Shadow 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I liked it until the last stanza didn't rhyme. Either the whole poem ryhmes or not at all. B/c it is confusing, I had to read the last part several times before it sank in that it sounded like the thrid stanza. I know what it is, it's b/c there are two stanzas between that throws me off, otherwise, I really like it a lot.
2006-11-16 21:51:33 · answer #2 · answered by lvminole 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
That is really a pretty and meaningful poem..you should be proud of yourself for writing that if you did :} Have a nice nite!
2006-11-16 21:49:10 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful!!!
2006-11-16 21:48:24 · answer #4 · answered by Dove 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
THAT S H I T SUCKED LIKE YA DADDY
2006-11-16 21:59:08 · answer #5 · answered by TEXNICIOUS 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's really cool and deep! if you wrote it, which i'm sure you did, its really good, i would be really proud of it if i were you!
2006-11-16 21:49:26 · answer #6 · answered by stephhh. 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it a lot!
2006-11-16 21:48:12 · answer #7 · answered by kayboff 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeah, that's okay.
2006-11-16 21:48:05 · answer #8 · answered by Dally4now2006 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
holy sh*t I love it.
2006-11-16 21:51:54 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋