Be Careful What You Wish For….
“Josh wake up it’s time for school”, screamed mom. See this is how everyday of my life starts out, it goes from getting screamed at by my mom to
getting screamed at by psycho nuns. Everyday is the same old story it never changes at all, I don’t even get to wear different color clothes, all I wear is a
disgusting blue jacket with a ridiculous checkered tie and black slacks, talk about boring. I have been begging my parents to switch me to public school
but they think that since my father went to Catholic school I will turn out to be just like him, boy is he wrong. Ok back to reality. Just 5 more minutes
mom it’s only 5:30. "No, Joshua Cole Tucker get up right this instant," yelled mom. Ughh why do I always have to get up two and a half hours before
school starts? I just wish I was grown up and didn't have to live with my parents and go to school. Josh slowly drifted back to sleep. He was awoken by
an alarm clock ratteling off the small cofee
2006-11-16 13:30:54 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
1. be consistent. is Josh the narrator? or is this told in 3rd person? you have a bit of both. stick with saying "I" for Josh or "he". you can't do both.
2. If mom is yelling, she needs to YELL! use "!" in those sentences.
3. as far as what is next, you need to figure out what the conflict will be. will it be an argument with mom? will Josh have to fight a burglar? Space aliens?
4. how will the conflict get resolved? it needs to end somehow.
2006-11-16 13:36:55 · answer #1 · answered by LEMME ANSWER THAT! 6 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Maybe ' Then as usual i got up got dressed in my dorky cloths and you know just getting ready for school.
I got in the car and began to daydream what my life would be like going to a public school. I thought of having cool friends, maybe a girlfriend, just more fun stuff. ' Does that give you a kick start from where you where? Then After that you could say what happened at school that day. I would have to extra ordinary though.
2006-11-16 21:38:48 · answer #2 · answered by ♥ Hello 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
He'll wake up in a messy living room, be late for work, have a boss that yells at him and makes him do stupid tasks. Then he'll lose the job he hates, get kicked out of his apartment. Then he'll wake up to his mom yelling at him to wake up. He'll be glad it was just a dream.
2006-11-16 21:37:30 · answer #3 · answered by kayle_rose 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How about when he woke up he was his mother. Kind of like Freaky Friday meets The Hot Chick.
2006-11-16 21:38:27 · answer #4 · answered by chica loco 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
to be continued , please stay tuned ,
2006-11-16 21:37:34 · answer #5 · answered by ? 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋