Can you make these in an essay??

Question

These are my essay questions I need help on. I already got a topic sentence for the first 2.
1. What rae some examples before Helen keller learns sign language?
2. What are some examples after she learns sign language?
3. What does Helen expierence tell you about the importance of language?
The examples for Before she learns sign language.
* feels like a ship in a fog.
* throw temper tantrums
* shows no emotion
* feels the need for love
* frustrated, violent
Examples after she learns sign language.
* knows what love is
* felt sorrow
* wants to learn more
* people now understand her.
* excited about the teacher.
Here is how the 1st question should start out with. There are many examples of how Helen felt before she learns sign language. The first example is that she felt like a ship in a fog. She felt like that because ships in a fog cant see just like Helen. 2. There are also many examples of how Helen felt after she learned sign language.

Answer 1

I think you know more than you think you do. you are on the right track with these examples. keep working! You'll do fine!

Answer 2

Before Helen Keller learnt sign language,she complained of feeling like a ship in a fog:ships in fog can't be seen.She talks about her emotions before learning sign language:like throwing temper tantrums,frustrated,violent and the feeling of emptiness in her life.
However,she shows a fulfillment in her life by feeling remorse for her actions,feeling loved and was excited about her teacher after she studied the sign language.
I HOPE THIS WILL HELP.you don't have to overemphasize.try condensing your long source into something simple but catchy,you don't want your reader to get bored by lengthy details.