suggestions and rating plz
Deaths gate
Have you ever wondered why we were put on earth
Have you ever wondered if you were a curse
well, i think that anything is possible
life! love! terrific parts of our journeys
maybe theres a race
maybe we are jus' sittin at deats gate!
Chorus:
What if we wer sitting there waiting and one at a time
he picked us up and brought us to a sign!
It said: hells this way and ur goin
i wonder if he sees us
i wonder if hes watchin..
does he have a billion tv's
that he watched all the time?
we could be, we must be, wow!
were at deaths gate
Do you see the rage in everones eyes?
do you see that we are not very wise
we do all these bad things
we dont even try
but all we do is say "sorry" at cry
you dont understand
he knows what ur doin
and you you will find
your looking at that sign!
chorus
deaths gate
a very scary place
were standing in line
and one at a time
everyone is goin onto that road
you fall and you see
your life shouldnt be...
DONE!
chorus (2x)
2006-11-16 09:16:20 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Pregnancy & Parenting ➔ Adolescent
yea..beach crazed! this definately came from da heart! i wrote it the day my bf broke up with me!
2006-11-16 09:24:31 · update #1
I like it. ITs so heartfelt, Its gonna make a great song!!
2006-11-16 11:31:32 · answer #1 · answered by lil_danca06 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It' sort of good.Just needs to change some parts to better parts
like:
deaths gate
a very scary place
were standing in line
and one at a time
You should do it:
Deaths gate
the scariest place
were all standing in line
wating our time
Well that's what I think.
2006-11-16 18:59:46 · answer #2 · answered by Demetra 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow. Those lyrics are amazing and I totally agree and love them. Kudos for the song and tell your band that they are Freakin' AwEsOmE!!!!!!!!!!
Congratz and good luck on your walk to fame!
2006-11-16 17:22:42 · answer #3 · answered by Hannah 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I don't know if I'd be a good judge but it seems like a cool song! GOOD LUCK!!!!!
2006-11-16 17:19:56 · answer #4 · answered by lee lee 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think songs come from the heart and obviously your heart isn't very happy..
2006-11-16 17:22:36 · answer #5 · answered by CelebrateMeHome 6 · 1⤊ 2⤋
Its kinda sad but if u know wat u meant with it its your song n noo one is in u to know wat u feeling but i read it n i like it.
2006-11-16 19:06:59 · answer #6 · answered by caitlyn_so_fly 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes!!! your VERY bad song....
2006-11-16 17:19:46 · answer #7 · answered by leanda 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋