Do you like my poem?

Question

God took his plane in hope to achieve,
The thing that would save us all.
His task was to overcome the devil,
Who lurked on the ground bellow.

When the devil's evil targeted,
The sky they flew across.
Would his believers still believe,
They were safe in his hands.

It takes less than two buildings,
To bring God to his death.
it just takes you to say to him,
"I don't believe in you."

His people saw their fellow men,
Scattered dead across the floor.
They searched for God but where was he,
How could he be alive.

The devil laughed at his success,
He knew that he had won.
For as he saw the fiel of dead,
He knew God had died too.

Answer 1

Awesome poem. That took alot of thought and imagation.

I also like freddie Mercury

Answer 2

1. God cannot, will not die
2. I just want to say to that person who said someone was being insensitive, that God decided it was time for the other person to die and be judged, and th person that didn't die had not completed his purpose yet on earth.
3. God doesn't need to fight the devil- he could just say one word and the devil would be thrown in the bottomless pit.
4. Decent writing style, but I agree with the person who said your words are trash!

Answer 3

It's deep. I'll give you that. We just had 2 policemen fired on here. One died. The wife of the one who didn't die said that her husband was protected by angels. I thought that was the most insensitive thing she could have said to the family of the one who died. Was her husband better than the other one?

Answer 4

Well...I lacks a certain artisian edge to it but I think it's good. I especially like the ending! *smile*

Answer 5

its a bunch of garbage, your writeing style is good but what you wrote is trash.

Answer 6

its good, try for the best