I have to write a one paragraph, at least six sentences, using sensory description (...the five senses) for "The Room Was a Mess."
It could be about her bedroom or his bedroom.
I also have to label the five senses.
could you give me help me write it? like some examples for each sense? thank you
also could you give some good strong adjectives i could use for each sense? thanks
2006-11-15 17:05:13 · 5 answers · asked by Sarah S 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Sight, smell, hearing, touch, taste .....
SIGHT --Looked around the room
SMELL -- the putrid odor of old sweaty socks
HEARING -- could hear the lost hamster scampering across the pile of potato chip bags
TOUCH -- was repulsed at the slimy feel of the rotten apple
TASTE -- but the unopened soda was quickly opened to quench my thirst
A few starters ..... now get busy !!!!!
2006-11-15 17:19:35 · answer #1 · answered by Wisdomwoman 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
1: smell, the room smelled like dirty clothes
2:taste: i didnt want to taste the chips that were left on the nightstand
3:sound: the sound that the radio gave was disturbing
4:looks: The room looked scary and messy
5:touch: i was to scared to touch anything that was messy in the room
those are the five senses hope this helps
2006-11-16 01:24:47 · answer #2 · answered by mommyandbaby 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1. The room was a mess and mom wanted it clean in 20 mins.
2. If it wasnt clean we would be grounded for the weekend
3. she doesnt want to be grounded so they get it clean but, she put all her toys under the bed
4. mom comes up and gives them a candy to eat for a treat
5. At night she notices the toys under the bed before she goes to sleep, mom gets very mad.
6. ohoh im really sorry mom i will never do it again
7. ok honey have a good nightz sleep and well clean it in the morning ok.
2006-11-16 01:15:55 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
your bedroom smells like a locker room.
i see you still have not changed the sheets from the last time you
creamed in them. the sheets felt stiff when i touched it.
the food you left on the floor may not taste so bad compared to hugging the bathroom toilet all night.
2006-11-16 01:18:30 · answer #4 · answered by 987654321abc 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
how it looks ex: clothes n garbage everywhere
how it smells ex: dirty socks, rotten food, etc..
how it feels ex: sticky surfaces
tastes ex: the air being stagnent, tastes like mold
hearing ex: radio n tv left on
2006-11-16 01:21:06 · answer #5 · answered by sweetmaniny 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋