please help?

Question

I have to write a one paragraph, at least six sentences, using sensory description (...the five senses) for "The Room Was a Mess."
It could be about her bedroom or his bedroom.
I also have to label the five senses.

could you give me help me write it? like some examples for each sense? thank you

also could you give some good strong adjectives i could use for each sense? thanks

Answer 1

The room was a mess.

papers/clothes, etc. scattered (sight) unsightly mess
CD blaring loudly (hearing)
some surface in the room is sticky from gum, candy, cake, etc.
(touch)
spoiled food under the bed smells rank (smell) putrid!!
The peron in the bedrooom is eating chips, crunching (taste)

Answer 2

When I saw the mess, it really smelled and sounded bad. Keep in touch, I said. And then, out I went with the lights. I can help with 4 outta 5. Good luck.

Answer 3

Easy as 1, 2, 3

1. Tell them what you're going to tell them.
I see the room is a mess, and it smells badly too, and I hear the crunching under my foot, and I looked and saw my foot was in a mess of food....but there was a wrapped chocolate bar, so I unwrapped it, tasted it ....mmmmm something was still good in that aweful, smelly, bad sight, crunchy footing...room...a good tasting chocolate bar.

Now. ..break this down as follows:
1. I'm going to tell you about a room....very messy but I found one thing still good.
2. Tell them.
3. summarize - Even though the room was that aweful, smelly, bad sight, crunchy footing...room...an unwrapped good tasting chocolate bar.

Answer 4

Just imagine yourself in a messy room and write what you feel. If your stuck on adjectives, start with a simple one, like bad, and go to thesaurus.com to find a stronger one.

Answer 5

She could hear the clock ticking, but it was buried in clothes. She couldn't see past them. She tripped and felt a bruise forming on her knee.

I don't know, good luck.

Answer 6

I would love to help you but you need to do your own homework. That is the only way you can learn!!
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