I have to write a one paragraph, at least six sentences, using sensory description (...the five senses) for "The Room Was a Mess."
It could be about her bedroom or his bedroom.
I also have to label the five senses.
could you give me help me write it? like some example for each sense? thank you
2006-11-15 12:27:48 · 3 answers · asked by Sarah S 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
are there any good adjectives that you can think of that i could use for one of the senses?
2006-11-15 13:01:44 · update #1
I entered my brother's bedroom. His desk was sticky with spilled coke. (touch) The fried chicken he ate last night, it must have rotted. I could smell the foul odor. (smell) As I look around, I can see dirty laundry everywhere! (vision) Wait! I can hear some foot steps! (hear) I must leave before he finds out I was in here!
How's that? You'll have to add one more but you can work on that yourself....
2006-11-15 12:41:35 · answer #1 · answered by tkquestion 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
:-) Sounds like a fun project. What could you throw in a room to make it a mess? I can think of some nasty messes. Rotten food...would stink. Perhaps the sound of flies buzzing around the garbage can. Sticky feeling of the desk where a soda spilled. Obviously there'd be visual stuff like the dust settling around the room. You can really get graphic. Have fun with this!! Think like a horror writer...you'll turn out some pretty gruesome stuff.
2006-11-15 20:38:31 · answer #2 · answered by cathy_cmr 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
before I entered I could smell..........
when I got to the door and looked inside...........
I could hear .........mice?....paint peeling.?........
I touched ?..............
I could taste the stench of rotting?...................
2006-11-15 20:35:26 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋