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Family Stranger

He has to leave.
Its hard to explain;
hard to fix.
how do I say
its time to go?

we sit laughing,
What needs to be said
was said
I know the time has come
its all so good
Smiles.
But mama looks
I know,
he has to go.

bad actors on a tiny stage,
I leave the room,
what can I say, what can I do,
Papa, I call,
has to come
away from family
no longer his

I love u papa,
so you must leave now.
this isn’t your home
try to see
its hard to say

just leave.
go back to your house.
I know your alone.
not my fault.
papa must go.



and also

Harmony

my mouth opens
inside my soul
bubbling out
like an open hole

sounds I make
with melody carries
telling a story
it wavers and varies

today I heard
my mother singing
to my little tune
as she sat cleaning

her voice and mine
mixed but softly
varied and wavered
a song so lovely

what was my story
now became more
sharing a soul
is no one way door

a soul, my song
not only me
song of the soul
is sweet harmony

2006-11-15 07:39:58 · 4 answers · asked by savanna m 2 in Entertainment & Music Music

4 answers

I've written the lyrics to over 7000 songpoems and because of this it's hard for me to just sit and read song lyrics (I'd rather write), but I must say I COULD NOT STOP READING. Though I like the 2nd one too, the first one is very very original. You're telling a story that really hasn't been told, if I'm taking it right. Anyways, thank you for keeping me reading! ;-) and good writing!

2006-11-15 08:09:38 · answer #1 · answered by Army Of Machines (Wi-Semper-Fi)! 7 · 0 0

Love them both. They show a lot of emotion.

2006-11-15 15:43:48 · answer #2 · answered by rowdyrebelgal 2 · 0 0

cool song

2006-11-15 15:43:04 · answer #3 · answered by girlegyrl 3 · 0 0

sweet :D

2006-11-15 15:43:20 · answer #4 · answered by huggz 7 · 0 0

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